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Post by Wolfgang on Nov 2, 2004 15:05:15 GMT -5
Tell me if this turns you on:
"A girl was 'nice' or she was 'not nice.' If a nice girl, she had a young man who came to her house to see her on Sunday and on Wednesday eveings. Sometimes she went with her young man to a dance or a church social. At other times she received him at the house and was given the use of the parlor for that purpose. No one intruded upon her. For hours the two sat behind closed doors. Sometimes the lights were turned low and the young man and woman embraced. Cheeks became hot and hair disarranged. After a year or two, if the impulse within them became strong and insistent enough, they married."
It got me pretty hot...
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Post by georgia(pacific)girl on Nov 2, 2004 18:08:36 GMT -5
no, definitely not turned on.
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Post by BonJoeV on Nov 2, 2004 18:17:41 GMT -5
FART!! Now that's a "Hot passage".
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Post by FloridaPerson on Nov 3, 2004 15:29:44 GMT -5
One time a girl touched my hand when she gave me change at the supermarket.
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Post by Vball818 on Nov 3, 2004 20:16:11 GMT -5
Very descriptive and I can see that particular scene on a Lifetime TV movie or an independent movie, but did it get me a hot. Nope.
Is this a paragraph on your book or screenplay you're writing?
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Post by IdahoBoy on Nov 3, 2004 20:34:41 GMT -5
"A girl was 'nice' or she was 'not nice.' This sentence sucks. |
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Post by Wolfgang on Nov 4, 2004 12:59:11 GMT -5
Is this a paragraph on your book or screenplay you're writing? Nope. I'm on my third novel now and my first sentence reads: "A cat chased a dog." I'm pretty much stuck like tires in mud. Probably because I'm not a cat person and can't really see a cat chasing a dog. My second novel started out: "A dog chased a cat." And I had no problems with writer's block. |
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Post by Wolfgang on Nov 4, 2004 13:02:39 GMT -5
[quote author=IdahoBoy®® link=board=chitchat&thread=1099425915&start=5#0 date=1099532081]
This sentence sucks.
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AHAHAHAHAHAHA...
Boy, you always look the fool whenever you post. That passage is from Sherwood Anderson's classic masterpiece "Winesburg, Ohio." It is one of the most influential collection of short stories in modern literature. Many writers have been influenced by that work; the likes of Hemingway, Fitzgerald, etc.
Of course, you're the one who wrote:
"I am trying to be framed."
in another thread in this forum, to indicate others are trying to frame you. That was a good laugh, I've got to admit. No one is going to take English or writing lessons from you, boy.
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Post by IdahoBoy on Nov 4, 2004 13:46:26 GMT -5
AHAHAHAHAHAHA... Boy, you always look the fool whenever you post. That passage is from Sherwood Anderson's classic masterpiece "Winesburg, Ohio." It is one of the most influential collection of short stories in modern literature. Many writers have been influenced by that work; the likes of Hemingway, Fitzgerald, etc. Of course, you're the one who wrote: "I am trying to be framed." in another thread in this forum, to indicate others are trying to frame you. That was a good laugh, I've got to admit. No one is going to take English or writing lessons from you, boy. Never heard of it or the author. The sentence still sucks. Who cares what I wrote? I don't pretend to be a professional writer. |
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